The Dawn of Everything (2021), by David Graeber and David Wengrow (Review)

I was in doubt whether I should read this book. Besides the enormous amount of praise it has garnered, I am aware of accusations that the authors have embellished their story by drawing conclusions from papers which those papers didn’t really support; or that the authors wanted to pursue a narrative that caused them to read between the lines a bit too much or cherrypicked a bit too much. I wouldn’t really know – I am not an anthropologist. But I remember reading Jared Diamond’s Gun, Germs and Steel (1997) and Yuval Noah Harari’s Sapiens (2011) and Steven Pinker’s The Better Angels of Our Nature (2011) – books that also have been criticised heavily after publication, with many scientists publishing counterarguments – and yet I am happy to have read those books. They introduced me to powerful ideas and I liked becoming aware of those ideas. And a little controversy is not bad for science. If it pushes other scientists to engage with the material and publish work to disprove those ideas, that is the basic stuff of science. Every scientific paper shouts its conclusion into the void, until someone else tries to disprove it again. That is how the field progresses. 

Graeber and Wengrow’s The Dawn of Everything in its turn gives counterarguments to books by people such as Diamond, Harari and Pinker, and many other authors’ works. And raises new controversies that other scientists will feel compelled to gather evidence to disprove in their turn. The point is ultimately that this book introduces a wealth of new ideas that science will be engaging with in the future, and that makes it worth reading. In fact, I suspect that this book will become necessary reading if you are interested at all in following the ideas about big-picture human history.

Graeber and Wengrow originally set out to write a book about the origins of social inequality but found out that it was the wrong way to look at things. Inequality was hard to define and furthermore, it presupposes that once upon a time in prehistory, there was no inequality. The whole notion rests on a vision of human history that the Davids began to suspect was not correct. The first chapter takes a huge detour to explain this, and I didn’t find it all that easy to follow their main point here. They make a case for the idea that the European enlightenment was influenced directly by contact with other civilisations, such as China and American Indians. In the cross-influence of ideas with the American Indians, Europeans doubled down on the idea that they are superior because of technological progress, invented this hierarchy of social evolution with primitives at the bottom and themselves at the top, and saw private property as a necessary evil for technological progress. The Davids’ issue with this is that this view of history ignores that “primitive societies” are still complex societies with well-reasoning individuals who might have something to say about our own modern civilisation, and that the inequality that is part of our technological progress might not be an inevitable and necessary evil. And therefore the authors want to give us another view of history that is more hopeful about our capacity to change for the better. I think. I hope the rest of the book makes it clearer. 

My first impression is that there is a lot of “perhaps” and “not inconceivable that” and “might have been”, because the book is busy tearing down existing ideas about human history as much as presenting a possible alternative vision. For instance, there are prehistoric graves found in Europe in which the bodies are fully clothed and surrounded by jewellery, and the Davids reference these graves at least three times in quick succession: first to suggest that prehistoric cultures might have been very egalitarian because one of the bodies had dwarfism but was taken care of well by the culture in which that person lived, secondly to suggest that some cultures may have regarded unusual individuals like dwarves as prophets and gave them religiously motivated burials, and thirdly to suggest that the graves are of kings who only ruled in summer because some nomadic cultures flip their social arrangements between seasons. So we get all these possible visions for what might have been, and all of them could be true, but we can’t know because we only have some graves to look at. And the point of all these stories is simply for the authors to say that prehistoric graves with jewellery don’t automatically mean that these cultures had an unequal, hierarchical society with hereditary kings.

So, I think that this book is making a few very simple points, actually. Prehistoric cultures were neither all innocent and egalitarian, nor all tyrannically hierarchical, but were flexible and switched between arrangements. Even the advent of agriculture or the dismissal of it was a conscious choice, and didn’t change much in that flexibility. Even a clear line between nomadic existence and cities does not really exist. The new question becomes: why did we get stuck in a particular form of governance with particular ideas about freedom and personal property? 

Unfortunately, the authors made it very hard for themselves by dragging in so many stories and claims, taking huge detours, which make their thesis chaotic and vulnerable to critique. Sometimes they expound on some could-be-true proposition such as that European festivals may have their origin in a prehistorical seasonal switching between hierarchical structures, and then the next chapter they take the idea as a given and build on it further. And so they often build ideas on top of ideas from chapter to chapter, ending one chapter with a ‘might have been’ and starting the next chapter with a ‘so we concluded that’, and I’m not sure how structurally sound that is. I am perfectly willing to entertain their main points, though, but overall, it was too speculative for my taste, and a bit misleading how they built conclusions on speculations.

What I see the Davids do a lot in this book is trying to prove or suggest the absence of something, which is generally a very hard thing to do in science. I can assert that there is no teapot circling around Jupiter, but proving it is really hard. In the same vein, the authors point to prehistoric ruins that consist of huge platforms or circular cities, and say that there are no signs of aristocracy or class differences there, but I find this weak arguments. Maybe the leadership at those places didn’t express itself in monumental architecture, and who knows what all those platforms were used for. The next chapter they do the same with the city Uruk. They point at the fact that the city had a big square, which in their words is just what you would expect if the city was run by civilian assemblies, and a few lines later they take that as fact. You might say that the authors don’t try to prove anything but are merely “asking the question”, but they do transform their hypotheses into conclusions at the end of every chapter.

The authors kept drawing conclusions from very subjective interpretations in a way that made me more and more annoyed with the book, and finally made me double guess everything that they claimed. Another example concerns the ruins of a city in China. Archeology shows that the city had big walls and a palace, and at one point the population exploded, the city walls were dismantled and the palace grounds now housed trash pits and squalid houses. Sounds like overpopulation to me. The authors immediately jump to the conclusions that this was apparently an age of prosperity and that we are looking at a social reform of equality, and from there on go to claim that social revolutions might have been common in prehistory. Every chapter makes this sudden move towards conclusions that they want to read in it. 

What I got out of this book were a lot of interesting perspectives, but the thrust of their overall argument stayed hazy for me. The problem was that the book pretended to pursue a research question, but the authors admitted in the first chapter that they in fact abandoned their research question and a quarter into the book transplanted it with a new one: why did we get stuck in a particular form of society? But with many of the narrative detours and discussions about freedom and private property, I didn’t fully understood their part in the argument that was being built. They were always three detours deep from some central line of argumentation. 

I think this book on its own is not enough to be convincing of the arguments that the authors make, and will have to be supported by a lot of additional future research. Neither can it be simply dismissed. They’ve opened a lot of doors for the future. That brings me back to my own first point that it is worth reading for the new ideas it introduces to the world. 

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16 Responses to The Dawn of Everything (2021), by David Graeber and David Wengrow (Review)

  1. bormgans says:

    I think you wrote a very fair review. As you know I didn’t continue the book after I read about too many problems with how they misrepresented the work of others. It’s kinda good to read you had somewhat similar feelings after finishing the whole thing, but I’m also glad you did get something out of it nonetheless.

    In a way, to me this book seems like a giant missed opportunity.

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    • Thanks! I’ll tell you, I had trouble finishing the whole book. I also think this was a missed opportunity. Not in the sense that no-one is reading it, because people clearly are, so the ideas that are worth investigating are out there now. But I had so many problems with the presentation of it. There were very strong biases throughout the text, combined with soapbox arrogance, and it rambled. It felt like a book about a handful of separate ideas that didn’t mesh together into a clear argument.

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  2. piotrek says:

    Great review! “the book is busy tearing down existing ideas about human history as much as presenting a possible alternative vision” – I agree, and I see this as an epic proposal that would require a lot of research and analysis to be proved, but it’s very thought-provoking. Their claims could never be proven by just one book, so I wasn’t disappointed, but it wasn’t enough to refute all the scholarship the authors disagree with. Pity Graeber won’t be able to further develop his ideas…

    Basically, I wanted to review this at some point, but you put most of my thoughts about it so well here, I won’t need to 🙂

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  3. Dawie says:

    Great review Jeroen. i cant say i am smart enough to know when people write real science stuff.

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  4. Ola G says:

    I’m going to give it a try at some point this year. I’m glad you liked it despite it being a very abstract book, in a way that deals with ideas and not concrete facts. Graeber did like to run away with his ideas and disregard the alternative interpretations, but it’s part of the charm if you’re willing to treat him as your partner in a conversation 🙂

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    • Yeah… but he can’t do that in a publication like this, claiming so much as truth. His ideas are interesting though and worth investigating. I’ll be looking forward to your and Piotrek’s thoughts about this. I hope you’ll have time for it.

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  6. Paul Connelly says:

    “And so they often build ideas on top of ideas from chapter to chapter, ending one chapter with a ‘might have been’ and starting the next chapter with a ‘so we concluded that’, and I’m not sure how structurally sound that is.”

    I have run into that style of argument in so many nonfiction books. Wonder if it’s taught in college writing classes?

    The purpose of the book to me seemed to be subverting several big picture narratives about How We Got Here that portray certain developments as inevitable and happening in a mostly predictable sequence. Which may be self-evident to some scholars, but probably has still not gotten across to a lot of intelligent readers who have not studied anthropology and history in great depth. It’s somewhat like what Feyerabend was doing in Against Method in using historical examples to subvert the then common narrative of How Science Is Done. The only firm conclusion you can draw is that It’s Complicated. The Davids find room for some optimistic possibilities among the complications.

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    • That is why I ultimately am grateful that I read this book, to understand some of those complications in our history. Maybe in some far future, we can re-apply some of the optimistic possibilities that the authors have found in our past. Thanks for your comment, Paul!

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  7. Anonymous says:

    I would say that the poInt of this book, and its great value lie In explaining how a very limited Eurocentric narrative has been widely accepted, and how serious scholars in many disciplines are now dramatically revising this myopic, fundamentally mistaken worldview. You don‘t have to be a scientist or an anthropologist to get this. It’s about broadening the frame and questioning our assumptions, or what we are taking for granted. A careful look at the bibliography of this book– where did.these guys get their information– is of enormous value.

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